Pain

The Sky above is also weeping ,
though in the form of rain,
but same as the feel inside my heart,
this is spiritual & divine but only confined to me
& my soul,
simply not for anyone else to understand.

After days of bliss & nights of glories,
yet again dark cloud reign my heart,
yet not too far neither too close,
i back-up myself to see a glimpse of hope,
this is how unimportant things turn out to be at last,
i guess they hurt ,
nevertheless loosing heart is not the last path,
but fighting to sustain the shock,
gradually will be my path.

All my efforts have gone in vain ,
these are memories of pain,
but I have my pride to maintain,
still trying to pertain,
they played with my heart only to entertain,
though i have no regrets in order to sustain ,
in the fond memory of my pain ,
I write these splendid words which eventually are of
no use to me but only to drain what is in my heart(pain).

by - Shafique

6 comments:

wow!!!!! man....nice one.......bt surely tune to nahi likhi hogi......likhi kya?/////
bt really nice one....

September 21, 2008 at 9:14 AM  

nice way of writing.. i think u sud use some other font color instead of white.. coz u are using black background
best of luck..
happy blogging :)

September 21, 2008 at 10:09 AM  

wht do u think ??
kush ...huh!!
m here to lie or wht
its genuine brohtr ..
n thnx
for comment....!!!

September 29, 2008 at 8:31 AM  

A splended approach!!its rlly hrt tching.."Pain"-coz i only no the situation wen he rote the poem....and for xpressing anything 1 has to get deep indulge into the situation to put our view wid feeling......and man he did!!!!!!

Fabulous job -keep it up!!!

September 30, 2008 at 10:14 AM  

thanx Swampy dude
it was tht heart breakin
thing ...u knw it all
huh!!!
thanx mate
( 4 commenting..)

October 4, 2008 at 8:59 AM  

'nevertheless loosing heart is not the last path',
'they played with my heart only to entertain'

nailed it!!

May 18, 2012 at 11:19 AM  

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